Friday, December 10, 2010

Hero: Children of Men

Hero’s Journey Children of Men
Ordinary World: London Theo has a normal life doing his job at the office.
Call To Adventure: Theo’s ex wife asks him to get her some travel papers.
Refusal of the Call: Theo says no
Meeting of the mentor: Jasper Theo’s friend convinces him to help his ex wife.
Crossing the threshold: Theo gets the travel papers but he has to travel with the person because they are joint travel papers.
Tests: The group are pulled over on their way to traveling and Theo’s ex wife is killed and the police are after them. So they hide out at a friends farm.
Approach: Theo finds out that the girl he is traveling with is the first person to be pregnant in years. Then he finds out that the people they are staying with at the farm are bad and are the ones who killed his ex wife.
The Ordeal: Theo runs away with the girl from the farm and escapes to a prison camp where they are planning on going.
Reward: The girls baby is born and it is the first baby in years.
Road Back: They then journey to find the ship that will rescue them.
Resurrection: There is a conflict between the army in the town and the men who are chasing Theo. When they see the baby they barely escape with their lives.
Elixir: Theo gets the girl and her baby to the ship but then dies because he was shot in the battle earlier. But his sacrifice was worth it because he saved the future of mankind.

Tuesday, December 7, 2010

50 word song story

There was a man named Biggie Smalls who lived in Brooklyn, NYC. He met this amazing girl and he married her. They had great times together and were a perfect couple. One day Biggies wife was shot and killed. He was so sad but he knew good things never last.

Sunday, November 28, 2010

Blurbs

1. Biggie Smalls: Just me and my Bit**
This song is about Biggie Smalls meeting his dream girl and making her his wife. It takes place in Ney York City. It talks about them going through life together and the things that they do. At the end of the song Biggies wife is killed and he is very sad.

2. 99 Red Balloons
This song takes place Berlin, Germany during the cold war. Two people go into a toy shop and buy 99 red balloons then release them. Everyone thinks the balloons are some sort of threat and are all freaking out. But in the end they find out it was just red balloons.

3.Love the way you lie
This song is about a boy trying to get a girl back. He really wants her back and he says if she leaves again he will tie her to the bed and light the house on fire. The story takes place in their house.

4. Viva La Vida Cold Play
This song is about a man who once was great but now he is going through a rough time. It takes place in a once great castle that is now unstable. He spent his whole life pleasing everyone else and now he is living his life for himself.

5.Train with no love
This song is about a man named Andre who gets sent to jail because of his friend. It takes place in a train station, jail and a hospital. When Andre gets out of jail he wants revenge on his friend but his friend is already dead.

sixers

1. Cash rules everything around me. CREAM

2.We were young, we were free

3.I could have been great once.

4.I once was just like you.

5.Me plus you equals perfect happiness

6.I am afraid to be great

7.I once had alot of potential.

8.Used to be smart drugs ruined that.

9.Music is the reason I live.

10. We used to be best friends.

Friday, November 19, 2010

Just me and my B****

Plot:The Plot Is Biggie Smalls and his wife going through life

Charachter: Biggie Smalls and his wife.

Conflict:The conflict is the struggles that they go through and the people trying to hurt them.

Theme:True Love never lasts.

Setting:Brooklyn, New York

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Impulse II

A man and a woman are in a bedroom the man is packing a suitcase.

W: Ill make it worth your while if you stay......

M:How many times do I have to tell you, LEAVE ME ALONE!

W:But I love you, dont you have any feelings for me after all the time we have spent together?

M:No how many times do I have to explain this? I used you to get what I want now I never want to see you again.

W:So are you saying it wasn't good?

M:Ya it was terrible...Your Terrible....

W:You are a jerk, But I still love you.

M: You Are Crazy! Leave me alone I dont like you I think you are the biggest mistake I have ever made.

W:So does that mean you dont want to hang out again.

M:Yes!

W:But I still want to hang out again....

M:Ok let me explain this to you, I HATE YOU AND I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!

W:But I love you!

M:Do you see this piece of paper, It is a restraining order I just got it today. It means If you ever try to contact me again you will be arrested.

W:Why would you do such a thing?

M:Because you are crazy. Bye

(woman starts crying man picks up suitcase and walks out the door.)

Friday, October 29, 2010

Dialogue

Two childhood friends are sitting in a bedroom packing a bag.

Are you glad to be going home?

Yes, but im a little nervous.

So am I, It has been a long time since we have been home.

I know, I dont know if I will be able to recognize the place.

You will be, Its impossible to forget.

I hope you're right.

Hurry and get packed the train leaves soon.

Ok, Im ready lets go.

Ok let me carry that for you.

Hell no!

(She punches him in the face)

What was that for!?

Sorry I am a little crazy.

Ok thats fine, well I hear the train lets hurry.

(They run down the street to the train station and jump on the train)

Well we're on our way.

Yep, we are.

(the train pulls off into the distance.)

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Fun Times

Fun day on the beach in the sand tryin to sleep. Sand blows in my eyes and stings my thighs I dont know why this sand hates me. Light up a ciggarett it blows away, more sand in my eyes more pain in my thighs. I hear music down the beach a group of people weep cause the sand hurt their eyes and they're trying to sleep. How great a day to spend on the beach sand in my eyes and between my thighs.

Friday, October 1, 2010

Direct Orders

Rock out like you just won the lottery. Rock out like you got the card you needed on the flop. Rock out like you dont have a care in the world. Rock out like you dont care what people think. Rock out like no one is watching. Rock out like you just had your first kiss. Rock out like its new years eve. Rock out like its the last night of your life. Like you just had the best night of your life. Rock out like she just said "Yes". Rock out like you aint got nothing to lose. Rock out like a stereotypical fool. Rock out!

Shake The Dust

This is for the widows and the widowers. This is for the poverty stricken child struggling to survive. Shake The dust. This is for the fat girls, the loners the losers. Shake the dust. This is for the repentant criminal trying to convince people he's changed. This is for the addicts. The struggling musician trying to make it big. Shake the dust. This is for the gays. This is for the tormented. This is for the dreamers. This is for the gangsters knowing no other way of life. This is for the liers, For the Sinners. Shake the dust.

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Im thinking about you....

Im thinking about you like rings think about fingers. Like soldiers think about triggers. Im thinking about you like a drowning man thinks about air. Like a stylist thinks about hair. Im thinking of you like an addict thinks of his drug. Like a designer thinks of a rug. Like a dog owner thinks of his pug. Im thinking about you like dogs think about bones. Like bums think about homes. Like poets think about poems. Baby I want you to know that im thinking about you.

Love is....

1.Love is my Drug
2.Love is a game nobody wins
3.Love is lust
4.Love is a blooming flower
5.Love is a coconut
6.Love is a broken record
7.Love is my life
8.Love is an addiction
9.Love is an hourglass
10.Love is hair

Introduction

My pen name this year for creative writing is going to be Jay Electronica. I choose this as my name because Jay Electronica creates powerful poetry in the form of rap music. He is an inspiration to me to be creative and be the best person I can be.